We read the "Wild Things The Wild Things Are” by Maurice Sendak. We created our own wild thing and pretended to be Max rowing up to the Island where the Wild things roam.
I rowed onto the rocky beach. Suddenly I heard an enormous roar. The trees were falling down all around me. I was scared. The monster was stomping and it felt like an earthquake !!! I was flying in the sky.
Then I saw the terrible monster’s red eyes. It had two heads and sharp horns like a dinosaur. I ran back to the boat and sailed away home.
Hi Norton,
ReplyDeleteAwesome piece of writing. I especially liked how you have used your senses to create atmosphere.
The next step in your draft writing is to see if you able to replace the word “then” at the start of sentences or even check if the word is required.
Keep up the great work